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Hope this helps: Voit näitä korjailla tekstiisi omalle koneellesi. Jatkan avustusta toinen päivä, tekstiä on niin paljon, ettei ehdi lukea kerralla :)
"We have drunk about one bottle of champagne eat cakes." -> häh?
"budged" -> budget
"mom would too" -> mom would do
"so her daughter get a wedding" -> so her daughter gets/would get a wedding
"for her dream" -> of her dreams
"but I spent most of my time anyway" -> +there
"all have been so easy" -> everything has been so easy
"as much I should be" -> as much as I should TAI as much as I should be cooking
"will make" -> makes
"so where's the point for cooking" -> parempi: so what's the point (of cooking)
"canals" -> channels
"workload with her" -> pois 'with her'
"I turn TV off and take plate to kitchen" -> I turn the TV off and take the plate to the kitchen (koska se on tietty TV, lautanen ja keittiö), tekstissä myöhemminkin puuttuu the-sanoja, ne voit etsiä itse.
"ones again" -> once again
"she adds with smile" -> she adds with a smile
"So how tired you are" -> So how tired are you. Muista sanajärjestys, tarkista muutkin, niitä on muutama tekstissä.
"A good" -> Good
"moves top of me" -> moves on top of me and
"preparation" -> preparations
"And does that" -> and did that
"to put something" -> to put something on
"that's skirt" -> that skirt
"lean closer" -> leans closer
"Blonde wave her long hair over her shoulder" -> häh?
"staring at them" -> stare at them
"towards to this" - > towards this
"skin start hurt" -> skin starts to hurt
"give me quick kiss" -> gives me a quick kiss
"I watch how they leave from the coffeehouse" -> I watch them leaving the coffeehouse
"if their have" -> if they have
"Jay knew that I am here" -> Jay would know that I am here
"seems to empty" -> seems empty
"wait will I hear" -> wait if I hear
"wear the bra" -> wear a bra
"deep breathe" -> deep breath
"keep going on" -> keep on going
"I am about spy Jay" -> I was about to spy Jay
"knocks the door" -> knocks on the door
"start arrange" -> start to arrange
"she seems to be really exiting" -> mitä? Innostunut (excited)?
"went Jay's" -> went to Jay's
"spying Jay" -> spying on Jay
"I spying" -> I am spying
"cross my mind" -> crossed my mind
"she that woman" -> see that woman
"even the woman" -> although the woman
"low-necked" -> low-cut
"no one isn't" -> no one is (ei kahta kieltosanaa)
"his work with" -> he is working with
"door open and close" -> door opens and closes
"on the armchair" -> in the armchair
"have waiting for" -> have been waiting for
"hold that wrong way" -> mitä mahdat tarkoittaa väärällä tavalla? Parempi: are holding that upside-down
"have spy on" -> have spied on
"now you asked" -> now that you asked
"late at the work" -> late at work
"related to" -> relate to
"if someone fifty years old woman" -> if a fifty-year-old woman
"would running around" -> was running around
"I have to worried anything" -> I have any reason to be worried
"he asks with calm" -> he asks calmly
"does she knows you are just a co-workers" -> does she know that you are just co-workers
"for cheating" -> of cheating
"wife trust me" -> wife trusts me
"says sarcastic" -> says sarcasticly
"slam the front" -> slams the front
Jay kysyy miten Liz tietää uuden työkaverin ulkonäöstä, mutta eivätkö he juuri tavanneet kahvilassa?
Olet unohtanut kysymysmerkit tekstistä. Aina kysymysmerkki kysymyslauseen perään.
Arvostelen luettuani koko tekstin.
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"Jay is pretty much" -> Jay feels pretty much
"I continues" -> I continue
"Jay finish" -> Jay finishes
"Jay lead her" -> Jay leads her
"and waiting" -> and I'm waiting
"he spend" -> he spends TAI he is spending
"cuz' my" -> because of my
"cabins door" = mökkien ovi
"feel myself tired" -> feel tired
"get weddings I like" = saada häitä joista tykkään. -> get the wedding I want
"piips" -> ei ole sana
"in love should be" -> in love should
"she will believe" -> she believes
"wasn't nothing", ei kahta kieltosanaa. En myöskään ymmärrä mitä haet tällä virkkeellä: "and it wasn't nothing I expected" -> se ei ollut mitä odotin? = it wasn´t what I expected
"Turn out" -> Turns out
"start blur" -> starts to blur
"some one grabs" -> somebody grabs
"You doesn't look" -> You don't look
"First of all when she has become a fucking doctor" = Ensnnäkin kun hänestä on tullut v*tun lääkäri
"says like knows" -> says like she knows
"just a stress" -> just stress
"says with realizing" -> says realizing
"a unwanted" -> an unwanted
"I just trying" -> I'm just trying TAI I was just trying
"says with offended" -> says offended
"glance me" -> glances me
"leave me" -> leaves me
"on the bed" -> in the bed
"I have felt dizzy a few weeks from now" = Minua on pyörryttänyt parin viikon päästä tästä
"couldn't ignore" -> couldn't ignore it
"most of couples" -> most couples
"start crying" -> started to cry
"talk about" -> talked about
"who sleeps" -> who is sleeping
"I would so like to" -> I would like to
"could manage to tear us apart" -> can tear us apart
"silent" -> silence
"between us just dropping" -> between us by dropping
"the big bomb", yleensä se on vain the big bomb
"think is wise" -> think it is wise
"a innocent" -> an innocent
"middle of" -> in the middle of
"lost a weight" = tiputtanut painon -> lost weight = laihtunut
"since I've been pregnant" -> since I became pregnant
"stand up" -> stands up
"put his dishes" -> puts/places his dishes
"of the air" -> in the air
"I put my arms around me" -> I put my arms around myself TAI I hug myself
"love with" -> in love with
"becoming wife's" -> future wife's
"I still are in" -> I'm still in
"hate the life" -> hate life
"comes inside" -> comes in
"would have make" -> would have made
"go through" -> go through them
"you would need" -> you could need
"to go through papers" -> going through the papers
"some trick" -> some tricks
"looks worries" -> looks worried
"planning own weddings" -> your own wedding (suomeksi häät on monikko, englanniksi ei)
"Liz's condition" -> in Liz's condition
"take care" -> taken care
"put her" -> puts her
"wait you" -> wait for
"I would listen" -> I listen
"bites her lower lip between teeth" -> bites her lower lip (ei tarvitse mainita hampaita, tuskinpa Liz voi muulla purrakaan alahuultaan kuin hampaillaan)
"she said" -> she says
"to tell it to you" -> to tell you
"it everyone" -> it to everyone
"haven't tell" -> haven't told
"this anyone" -> this to anyone
"to get marry my" -> to marry me
"totally asshole" -> a total asshole
"can I blame" -> whether I can blame
"wanna you" -> want you
"So does" -> So did
"top of her" -> on top of her
"took their" -> taken their
"Jason pat" -> Jason pats
"make it sounds" -> make it sound
"like this it would be end of everything" -> like this is end of everything TAI like this would be end of everything
"beginning for" -> beginning of
"other end" -> on the other end
"priest start" -> priest starts
"past through" = ohi läpi
"and smile" -> and smiles
"can me face" -> can be face
"you tech" -> sinä tekniikka
"You free to me" -> You free me to
"Liz slide" -> Liz slides
"I don't scare" -> I'm not scared of
Muu teksti on kirjakieltä, mutta sitten käytät vakituisesti muutamaa puhekielistä sanaa. Ne eivät sovi yhteen ja pistävät pahasti silmään. Eli korvaa nuo 'cuz-sanat ja wanna jne.
Miksi Samantha kysyy, että menevätkö Jay ja Liz naimisiin, koska Liz on raskaana? Juurihan kävi ilmi, ettei Jay tiennyt kihlattunsa raskaudesta mitään.
Käytä aivan liikaa 'says with a smile'. Liikaa juttelua hymyillen.
"I look Liz's eyes and I slide it to her finger. Liz slide the ring to my finger. -I love you, Jay, she says with tears in her eyes. I pull her in my arms and give a long kiss." Huomaathan, että tämä kohta on Lizin nimen alla, eli mennyt väärälle minä-kertojalle.