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Is it a crime to fall in love and surrender yourself to the other? Sometimes I feel like it it’s so. I know that chains won’t hold or bars stop you if you decide to leave. Every morning, every evening, every single night, I want you next to me. Even if I leave someday, the time will still line the two of us with gold. Look at the wings of butterflies, they don’t fly wondering how soon the warmth of sun will fade away, so why do we worried ? I’ll stay here and I’d promise you the sun and even the stars if only I could tame tomorrow… But now, I don’t want to think about it…
My skin remembers every touch, mind the meaning of you words, heart finally understands the longing, and every one of them is craving for more. If I wasn’t sure that you’ll be there, i wouldn’t go on and couldn’t take my eyes off the ground… So you’ll be here even tomorrow, won’t you?
Now I know that you were a danger far too great to avoid, and way too tempting to pass by. And that’s why I’m here now! :)
“You’re the stronger one with you I don’t fear the darkness of the city. Next to a crowd you hold on tighter and my fear disappears.

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I feel like Love, is a crime...... 2014-08-31 10:53:28 TarraLeguaani
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TarraLeguaani Arvostellut: TarraLeguaani    August 31, 2014
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Otsikosta pilkku pois, nyt siinä lukee: "Tunnen itseni rakkaudeksi, onko rikos..."

"Sometimes I feel like it it’s so." -> toinen 'it' pois.
"...or bars stop you.." Mitä tässä yrittää lukea? Barriers?
"...line the two of us with gold". Mitä tässä haetaan? Reunustaa? Rajata? 'Line' ei ole hyvä sana siihen.
"...so why do we worried?" -> 'so why are we worried'.

"..a danger far too great to avoid, and way too tempting to pass by." Hieno lause!


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