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Prologue


I don't believe in love for the first sight- shit. It is just what we see in the movies or can read in the romantic books. And if someone tells you otherwise it's a bullshit and don't fall for it. I don't believe there would be the one and the only for you. That's just sad. Why should we tie up our self with someone when there's a plenty to see. What comes about the higher power, I don't buy that either. It's all just a coincidence, it's just be in the right place in the right time.

But then I met her.


Chapter One

Jay

My mouth feels like a cotton and I can taste last night liquor, hell, I might as well be still in drunk. Room spins when I try to get up from the bed. I reach my jeans and shirt from the floor. I can barely stand but somehow I manage to get dressed.
-Where's the fire? My last night screw asks me. I don't know her name and I have no interest, what so ever, to make acquaintance with her.
-Gotta go. See you around, I say without any meaning. I run out from her apartment.
I start the car and maybe I shouldn't drive but I am not gonna come back here later.
I park the car front of my home. I drag my ass in the shower, yeah, I definitely need a quick shower to wash away last night skunk off my skin.
After shower and two cups of coffee I start feel human again and it's time to go to the gym. I bet Jason is already there.

Jay

I open the gym door and see Jason on the treadmill. I toss my training bag on the floor. -Hey, I say to his back.
-So how was last night? he asks and even I can't see his face I know he is grinnig. -You know, same old same old, I say and start a treadmill next to him.
One hour and half later we sit in the locker room.
-So last night chick seemed to be quite smitten with you, Jason says casually.
-She was just one among the others, nothing more, I say.
-If you keep fucking around like that soon you have to start the second round, Jason says.
-Hey com' on man. Don't even suggest that I should settle down. You know that it's not me, I say a bit frustrated. My parents keep telling me that and they hope to get offspring. Which is not gonna happen if it's up to me. To quote the song ”Sex is the best when you're not in love” by New Politics. That phrase has worked perfectly so far.

Liz

-It's so boring, Emily whines. I fill shelves in the gift shop. We bought this together about two years ago. Emily has been my best friend since elementary school. I have two younger brothers and she feels like sister, which I've always hope to get.
-It's not boring, I say. -Summer is coming and soon our shop teeming with customers, I add.
-I didn't mean that. I mean my love life, she continues. -Or lack off it. You know that it's been a while since I had sex.
-Well, welcome to the club, I smile. -And define a while, I thought I saw you about two weeks ago with some guy, I wink.
-Yeah, well two weeks can feel long, she says. -By the way, how do you handle it? she asks.
-Handle what? I ask back.
-Com' on Liz. You know that I love you but you are the most uptight woman what I know. And I talk about sex,she adds. -Even my granny has a more active sex life than you have, and she has born in thirties.
-I'm not uptight. I just haven't found the right guy, I say. -I don't see the point sleep with some guy whom I don't have any interest.
-That is just an excuse, she says and look straight to my eyes. -I know, this weekend we're so gonna go out and we won't go home alone, she adds a smile in her face.



Chapter Two

Liz

-I gotta go to the bathroom. Be right back, I yell over the music to Emily. There's a long line to the bathroom but I don't mind wait there. My head aches because of the loud music. Emily is so wasted and seems to have fun with all these guys on our table. Maybe I have to loose up a little and start drinking faster and maybe then our company would be tolerable.
I go back to our table with a new drink in my hand. Okay here it goes, I'm not gonna be a party pooper.

Several drinks and hundreds of shots later I found myself flirting with some eye candy. He has dark brown hair and the bluest eyes I have ever seen. And I am pretty sure that if this guy happened to ask me home with him I would totally cave in.

Jay

I am in the new night club with Jason and his brother. I am not in the party mood thanks to my parents. This week has been really stressful at the work. My parents keep complaining my personal life. I am fucking twenty-seven so where's the rush. And this have never been a problem before. I glance around the room and check tonight's ”offers”. Not impressive. Fuck me, maybe my parents nagging has some sort of impact on me. Then I saw her. A woman in tight black dress. Her hips waves while she walking. I finish my drink and take a walk towards her.
-Hey beautiful, I whisper her ear. She jumps and looks like I 'm about to get a drink in my face.
-Hey, she says back and smile. Her big brown eyes look straight into mine. She is not the woman I used to fuck but she has something which catch my breath.

Liz

Shit, shit, shit. I wake up and realize that this isn't my bed or my room. I look at guy who sleeps next to me. It's Jay. How on earth I end up here?! Too much tequila I guess or did he drug me?
-Morning. Don't wait having a breakfast in the bed, Jay mumble.
-No worries. I'm not planning to stay here longer than I already had. -Did we have sex? I add.
Jay lift a cover. -Yeah, I am naked and so do you. So looks like something happen, he grins. -Beside when I wake up naked with chick it doesn't mean just holding hand, he winks.
-Great, I say and start grab my clothes on the floor and get dressed.
-Hmm, so you don't remember anything what happened last night, he asks with smile.
-Well, tells a lot about your skills in the bed, I say. And take my purse and storm out.

I walk back home and thoughts are spinning in my head. I try to remember what happened last night. Well, what ever it was it won't gonna happen again, especially not with Jay. We were in the same high school and I remember him pretty well from those days. All the girls were so under his charm. But he was only dating the cheerleaders. Jay was the popular one and everyone wanted be friends with him. His parents were rich, well still are. He used to have wild home parties and if you were invited you were something better than rest of us. I was never invited.
And now I have slept with that pompous playboy, just perfect.

Liz

-OMG! Emily grins. -You and Jay! Okay now you have to tell me everything!
I start regret that I even told her that I slept with Jay.-There's nothing much to tell, I say. -Honestly, I don't remember much. I was really wasted that night, I add.
-Well, if I would slept some one like Jay I definitely would remember it, she says.
-Like I said, there's nothing to talk about.
-We are not in the high school anymore Liz, Emily say.
-I know but I bet he hasn't change a bit since then.
-You guys could make cute couple, though, she says and looks contemplative. I leave her dreaming and go to help customer. I keep myself busy and refuse to think Jay even though I have started to remember glimpses here and there from our night together, and those glimpses make my ”lady part” dancing.



Chapter Three

Liz

I think I suffer a concussion that's only explanation why I get dressed for Jay. Well, actually thanks to Emily I am going out with Jay. She thinks we make a cute couple, like she put it. I promised to go this one time but she had to promise not set me up again. Emily smirks and come next to me. She looks at me from head to toe. -You do look nice, she says eventually. I look myself in the mirror. I don't wanna give him impression that I have dressed just for him, I wanna look pretty but casual. I wear blue knee high dress with small sleeves. I leave my hair open and just a light make up and I'm good to go.

Jay

She looks just amazing with her blue dress. I go and open the car door for her. -Hey. You look wonderful, I say and this time I really mean it.
-Hey to you too, she smiles politely and sits in my car. I run other side of the car and sit in the driver's seat. We drive in silence and I turn radio on to fill this awkward silence between us. So this is it to be on date with a girl. Well, we didn't talk much in first night together so maybe this is our thing.

Liz

-Wow, this looks pretty nice place? I say and look around. I am actually impressed that he brought me here. So classy restaurant.
-Yeah, well, he says and looks pleased about my reaction.
-You know that you don't have to do charity.
-I do not do charity, he says with pesky half smile on his face.
-So why the hell you agreed to go out with me?! I am everything what you might find unattractive, I ask.
-So you know what my type is? Let me hear it, he says curiously.
-For starter I don't own pom poms or do acrobatics in my free time, I answer.
-Are you familiar with concept opposite attraction? He says with a wink.
-Yes but that's not apply us, I say back.
-Well, I'm not so sure about it, he winks.
-You are unbelievable!I say and shake my head.
-Thank you, he smirks.
-I didn't mean it as a compliment, I say and roll my eyes.

-Are you ready for order? friendly voice asks.
We glance each other. -Yes.
Well, I might as well eat here, who knows when I get a chance to dine place like this, if never. We eat our diner in silence and I enjoy every moment. Food is good, restaurant is really beautiful and staff is friendly only downside is my ”date”, if he even is one. I will strangle Emily for set me up with him. If she has eyes on her head she should have seen that we don't get along. Actually I am more like air to him. I bet that he doesn't even know who I am.

He drives me back to home. He parks car on my driveway.
-Don't wait an invitation cuz' I'm not gonna ask you in, I say and look at him. He lifts his hands up like sign for surrender -Won't even dream about it, he says and keeps his eyes on the driveway.
-Good, I nod and walk away.

I open the front door and it takes all my will power that I won't turn to look if Jay is looking at me. I go straight to the bed. I just lie on the bed staring at the ceiling. Something happened this evening. I know exactly what kind of guy he is and it should make me take off and run in the other direction. But that's not what I feel, it's more like something has woken up in me.

Jay

That night I keep tossing and turning in my bed. I might get a cold or something. That is the only reasonable explanation why my thoughts keep drifting back to Liz. I don't even go out with women, it's just a sex. But there I was on the date with Liz. And for the first time in my life I think this woman is not with me because the money. She doesn't try impress anyone, she just is herself. She seems to be clever with a smart mouth. Not like I have used to but I like that. She truly is something else. I'm not gonna admit that I have a crush on her.



Chapter Four

Jay

I am outside of the gift shop. I have found myself thinking of her, way too often. I so need to see her.
-Well, well, well what brings you here? Oh wait, let me guess you are here to buy a vase for your dear mother, Liz's friends says.
-Not really, I smile. -She's at the back. I'll get her, she says before leaving. I don't even know does Liz wanna see me and should I make some lame excuse for reason why I am here. I am not prepared of this.
She comes back with her friend and for my relieve she doesn't look mad. -Hey Jay, she says.
-Hey. Well, you probably wonder what I'm doing here, I say.
-Oh not at all. Em said you need some help. So, looking for a gift for your mother?

Liz

I keep jabbering about different kind of vases and other options what I think Jay's mother would like. I try to keep my voice casual and hide the fact that I kind of missed his presence.
-Okay, have you done, Jay asks suddenly. -Honestly, I don't really care any of these, no offense, but I would like to take you out, again, with me, he adds.
-Oh okay, non taken, I mumble.
-So how's this weekend, Saturday maybe? He asks.
-Well, I am quite busy, I say and glance at Em. And try to send her signal that she has to help me out off this situation. I can't go another date with him. What good it would bring when Jay occupied my thoughts completely.
-No she's not, she says. -I can do Saturday shift. It's not like I have another plans, she grins. Thanks a lot Em.
-So Saturday at four, he asks. -I'll pick you up, he adds before I have chance to answer.

Liz

I dive in to my wardrobe. This is insane, why I suddenly care so much my appearance. But it would be really helpful if I knew where is he planning to take me. It's warm so I decide to put my favorite skirt and simple top. I put my hair up and then down and up again. I let my hair fall down again and decide to leave them like that. I hear how car stop on my driveway and I run to the front door. I grab my purse and go out.

Jay

Liz looks absolutely wonderful. She doesn't have to wear design clothes or make up like drag queen, she is beautiful just as she is.
I drive outside of the city. My parents own a lakeside house and I thought it would be just perfect place to spend time with Liz.

One hour later I park my car front of the house. I help Liz out of the car. -Wow, is this place yours? she asks. -Yep, my parent's, I answer. I lead her to the entrance and open the door. She walks in and her head turns from side to side. -So it this your summerhouse? -Oh well not really. We come here all the year round, I say. -Come to the backyard, there's a amazing view to the lake. I show the way and she follows. I open the door to the patio.

Liz

This place is just amazing. And Jay was so right about the view and especially the day like this. Backyard is a huge and it goes all the way to the shore. Two boats standing next to a pier. Those boats look pretty expensive, well, this whole property is, makes me wonder what might their home looks like. Thank God, Jay didn't buy anything from our store, Carney's family seem to have very expensive taste.
Liz

Despite everything we have good time together. And I am surprised how easy it is to be with Jay and for some crazy reason he seems to enjoy my company. We walk along the shore and I let waves wipe my feet. Water it is not that cold than I thought.
-Planning to take swim, Jay says softly and smiles. -Oh no, no, I don't have a bathing suit with me, I say quickly. I don't have plans to go a skinny dipping, even we have seen each other naked and apparently had sex which doesn't count cuz' it's all blurry.
-What a shame, I was looking forward to see you without any clothes, he smiles. -Nah, another time then, he says and winks. -What we can do is have a boat ride, come.
-Can you really drive one of these? I ask
-Well, you'll see, he smirks.

Jay

It's a late evening when we drive back to the home. What more I be with her much more I wanna spend time with her.
I park my car front of Liz's home.
-Jay, I was meaning to ask you something, she says.
-Then ask me, I smile.
-Why me?
I look at her and she looks a little worry. I don't even know what that question means. -Why you what.
-Oh I mean at the night club. What made you come to talk with me? She asks and look straight into my eyes. -Was it a bet?
-What! No, of course not. Why you even think something like that?
-Well, let's face it. I'm not exactly your ty...I kiss her before she finish that word. I take her face between my hands. She part her lips and we kiss harder. She tastes so sweet and I don't wanna let her go. -I need to take a breath, she says between kisses. Her eyes spark and she smiles her beautiful smile.
-Don't ever think that you're not my type, cuz' you so are, I say and kiss her softly.

Jay

I drive back home and can't stop smiling. Yep, it's official I am so crazy about Liz. For this day forward I'm gonna make sure that she will see herself as amazing as I see her.



Chapter Five

Liz

-It is so nice to finally meet you Liz, Jay's mother says. -He doesn't bring girls here often, she adds and glance his son.
-I am Lauren and here is my husband Richard.
-Nice to meet you, Richard says and shakes my hand. He is handsome man and it is easy to see where Jay gets his looks. Their house is a huge and I have only see hall way and living room. This is so much different where I have used to, no doubt why everyone kept buzzing about Jay's home party in high school.
-Did you two know each other in the school, Lauren asks. -I assume you are about my son's age.
-We? Oh no Mrs. Carney, I say with a smile. -We were in totally different group of friends.
Well, actually I can't say that I was in any kind of group. I had couple of good friends when Jay was the most popular kid in entire high school. But I won't tell that to his parents. They might think that I am some kind of looser.
-Oh well I am happy you have found each other nowadays, she says with smile.
-So Liz what do you do for living? Richard asks.
-I have my own business, I say. -Well actually I own it with my friend, I add. If something I am proud of our gift shop. Em and I planned to open store when we were in high school so it has been my a long dream.
-Oh how wonderful, isn't it Richard, Lauren says. -What kind on business do you and your friend have, she adds curiously.
-It is a gift shop, I say with a smile.
-Are you talking about that lovely boutique which is corner of Elm street and Maple street? She asks.
-The very same, I keep smiling.
-I have shopping there several times but I never thought that you are the owner, Lauren says. I like her, she is really sweet woman and seems to be interesting in me. Well, I am dating her only son.
Richard creeps me out for some reason. When Lauren is sweet then Richard is totally opposite of it. And Jay stays awfully quiet. I glance at him and he seems to be very uncomfortable.
-So Liz, you must be daughter of John and Kathy Brown? Richard asks.
-Yes, I am Mr. Carney, I say and I have feeling that he is not pleased. I didn't born in a upper class which means I'm not suitable for his son.
-I hope you will stay for dinner, Lauren asks. I look again at Jay and he looks back at me and shrugs.
-Of course you stay, Lauren answers for me. -Jay, you can show the house to Liz while dinner gets ready, she adds. And I am most grateful that this ”interrogation” is over.

Jay

I lead Liz to the upstairs. I open my door to my old room and hurry her inside and shut the door. -I'm so sorry about my parents, I say. -You don't have to stay for dinner if you don't want, I add. I know my parents can be a bit much, I know it way too well.
I put my arms around her and hold her tight. -Your mother is really nice though, Liz says with smile.
-Liz, the truth is that I haven't brought girls here, well not since high school, I say and let her go. Liz looks surprised. -Lucky me, she says with sarcastic tone in here voice. -Hmm, do you think you brought a wrong girl, she adds. Why she even thinks something like that when I am crazy about her. -No, I don't think so, you are exactly the girl I wanna meet my parents. I lift her chin and kiss on the lips.

I am so relieved when dinner is over and I can take Liz back to her house. The dinner wasn't so bad after all and Liz handled it so well. I park my car on her driveway. -Jay, do you wanna come in, she asks. -Is is quite obviously, I grin.
She turns lights on while we walk through her house. -Bedroom is in this way, she whisper softly.

Liz

This is the first time when Jay stays over night. He looks handsome even in sleep. I run my fingers along his arm and kiss him on his shoulder. -Wanna have another round, he asks with a smile. -I thought you were on sleep, I say. He turns to the side so he is face to face with me and pulls me in his arms. -How could I sleep when I know that woman like you lie next to me, he says softly and kisses me. I know that tomorrow I will be very tired.

Liz

-I think you should take the next customer, Em says and winks.
-Looking for something specific? I ask with a smile. Jay looks like he would be rather anywhere else than here.
-Well, now you asked. There's this awesome woman I would like to surprise, Jay answers with a smile and looks into my eyes. Suddenly room feels much warmer and I bet my cheeks are burning. Jay comes closer and wipe my bottom lip with his thumb. He moves his hand and lifts my chin and press lips on mine.
-You two sickens me, Em says loudly and makes sure that we hear it.
-Hmm, do you know what she likes, I ask. Jay glance around the shop. -Not sure, he says softly.
-Maybe you should get to know her better before buying gifts, I say.
-You might be right, he says and look deep into my eyes. -So any plans for tonight?

Liz

I'm at the Jay's home and we're watching movies.
-Stop that, I say with laugh. -I need to focus on the movie.
-Poor Liz, the movie is not why I asked you come over, he whispers in my ear. He takes my face between his hands and kiss me. I kiss him back, fuck the movie this is much nicer. I grab on his shirt and pull him closer. I move to sit on his lap. He start unbutton my shirt and before I know I'm topless. His hands wander around and he grabs my breast in one hand. I pull off his shirt and toss it away. He traces kisses on my jaw and neck. I gasp when I feel his mouth on my breast. Jay puts me on the couch and pulls down my panties and shorts. He takes off rest of his clothes and comes top of me. I slide my hand down from his chest all the way to his rock hard abs and finally his cock. His body is just amazing and I can't believe my good luck. This man wants me as much as I want him. I move my hand up and down on his hard shaft. Jay slide two his fingers inside me and take me place I've never been before. Oh God his so good.

Jay

She feels so good and ready but I'm not gonna let her come yet. I take my fingers out and place them with my mouth. I lick and suck her clit. I hear her moan and it is the most beautiful sound in the world and knowing that it is me who is the reason of that makes me feel fucking king of the world. When I know she's close I move so I can slide my cock into her. I keep kissing her while fucking. I can get enough of her.

We lie on the couch, our bodies entwined. I stroke her hair with my fingers. -Wanna take shower with me, I ask and kiss her forehead. She turns her head and smile. -Do you even have to ask that. She gets up and grabs my hand and guide me to my bathroom.

I rub gently soap on her body and make sure to do proper job. -You are really thorough, she smiles. I kiss her on the lips. -Hmm wanna do good job so you would take a shower with me another time too. -You don't have to worry about that. Now, wash me and then change the turns, she says and presses her body against mine.

Liz

If I thought that sex with Jay was like piece of heaven then shower with him is not far behind. I love his every touch on my skin. I rub a soap between my hands and then start to rub all over his body. I do it slower than usually cuz' I can't get enough of his hard well muscled body under my fingers. I get down on my knees and massage soap along his legs, up and down. Jay looks my every move on his body. I look up at him and give him a smile and put my lips around his rock hard cock. I play with my tongue his shaft. I wrap my fingers around his cock to give him more pleasure. I such harder and take it deeper. He puts his hand through my hair and pulls it back. -Liz, oh God woman, he mumbles. -Come here, he adds and pulls me up. He lifts me on his arms and I wrap my legs around his waist. He presses me against the bathroom wall and come inside with one quick thrust.

Jay

-Who would have thought that you start dating Liz, Jason grins.
We sit in the coffee house. I had to get out from the office so we decided to meet here. If someone has said two weeks ago that I end up dating I would have told to get bend. Past two weeks I've been ecstatic and it is all because of Liz.
-Well, I know but it has been awesome, I say with a smile.
-You know what. She went high school with us, Jason says.
-We did? I ask. -I don't remember that.
-Yeah, she looked a bit different back then, Jason says. I look at him and don't know how to comment because I have no idea what is he talking about.
-What do you mean by different? I ask curiously.
-Com' on man, you seriously don't remember, Jason looks surprised. -She was fat. Back those days you would have never even bother to say hey to her, he adds. -Or look at her.
-Thanks, you make it sounds like I am totally asshole, I say back.
-Well can you put it otherwise, Jason says and looks up. My eyes follow his and there she is, stand next to our table. She gives quick look and then storm out. Fuck it.

-Wait Liz, I yell and run after her. Fucking Jason and his big mouth and why Liz has to be here. Everything has been perfect until this moment. I grab on her shoulder I turn her so we can be face to face.
-I can't apologize something I don't even remember. I might have been a dickhead back then but I'm working on it, okay.
-That's the point Jay. There is nothing to remember or be a sorry about, Liz says. -You didn't notice me back then because I was chubby in your standard, Liz adds. -And think that I actually fell love with you!
-Get down from your ivory tower, Liz.
-What that supposed to mean? She asks with anger in her voice.
-You really think you are fucking perfect and better than rest of us, I say back.
-I have really realistic idea of myself, she says with laugh. -And I am far from perfect. -You are the only one here who thinks is the central of the universe, she adds.
-In that case you don't know me at all! -Why it is so fucking hard for you to see how much I like you Liz, I say and feel myself really frustrated. -I'm not that guy anymore, I add.
Her big brown eyes stare back at me. I don't know what to do or say. I have never been in this kind of situation, quite contrary, try to avoid things like this. But nothing is the same anymore.
-Just forget it Jay, she says softly. -You are too much for me anyway, she adds and leaves me standing there.

Liz

I walk back to the work. I should have seen this coming. I knew it from the beginning we were not meant to be. And suddenly I am back in the old high school and feel myself as chubby girl as I were then.
-Ookayy, what happened? Emily asks and looks worry.
-Jay, fucking Jay happened, I mumble between the teeth.
-Oh, so you two are not an item, she asks with smile in her face.
-Would you mind and wipe that stupid smile off your face, I say. -And we were never an item, I add. -Actually it is your fault, you was the one who said that I should go out with him.
-Wow wow, don't turn this back on me Liz.
-I'm so sorry Em, I say and hug my best friend. -Do you know what is the worst part, I add.
-What, she asks softly.
-I love him, I whisper.

Chapter Six

Liz

I don't know what made me came here in this weather. It's been pouring down almost whole day. And here I am. Maybe I have serious brain damage. I get out of my car and stand in the rain. Okay, take a step and then another, I try to tell my feet to move.
I don't know does he wanna even see me or is he even home. All I know that I need to see him. I don't care his past, not anymore. We all have past and that's it. The most important thing is what we are today. I hear how front door opens and Jay step outside. He start walking towards me.

My wet dress tangled around my body. His eyes wipe over my body. I let him make the move and see how far it takes us. There is no denial I want him. I breath heavily and my chest rise in every breath. He comes closer and lift my chin. My lips part and I longing his kiss. He presses his lips on mine and I feel how my body electrified. I lean on him and wrap my arms around him. He runs his fingers on my back and ribs. We are soaking wet but right now it doesn't matter. I wanna take off our clothes and feel him skin to skin. He unzip my dress and pulls it on the ground. I unbutton his shirt and toss it away. I open his belt and unbutton his jeans and let them drop on the ground. We make out half naked while rain pours down. -Wanna go inside, he asks between kisses. I nod my head. He lifts me on his lap and carries inside. He carries me in his bedroom and toss me on the bed. I take off my panties and bras while he pulls his boxers towards ankle and kicks them on the floor. He comes top of me and just fast thrust and he is inside me. I gasp when I feel his cock in me. Our hips moves in the rhythm. He body gets tense and I know he is close. I grab his balls in my hand.

He lets his body fall down. I wrap my arms around him. I stroke his back and run my hand through his hair. He rise on his elbow and looks at me. -I'm not gonna say anything lame like I have waited this moment when I first time saw you but I'm gonna say that I've been wanted you for a while, he smiles and kiss me. -Well, I'm not gonna say that either, I laugh. -But I am happy that we end up bed, I add.


Epilogue


He was handsome and charming. His smile melt hearts. His voice made your knees weak. His body made you drooling.
He was every girls daydream.
And he was everything what I despised until I fell love with him.



Play list in alphabetically:

All Time Low- Get down on your knees and tell me you love me
All Time Low- Just the way I'm not
All Time Low- Paint your wings
All Time Low- Sick little games
All Time Low- Somewhere in Neverland
All Time Low- Time bomb
All Time Low- Walls
Imagine Dragons- Bleeding out
Imagine Dragons- I bet my life
Imagine Dragons- It's time
Imagine Dragons- On top of the world
Imagine Dragons- Shots
Lifehouse- Halfway gone
Lifehouse- Hurricane
Lifehouse- I'm falling even more in love with you
New Politics- Fall into these arms
New Politics- Stuck on you
New Politics- Tonight you're perfect

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Moikka Alina!

En osaa sanoa tuohon englannin kielioppiin mitään, sillä laadukkaasta tekstistä päätellen olet siinä paljon minua parempi! :D

Pidin tuosta alusta, vaikka käytitkin kenties liikaa "kakka" - sanaa :D Hyvä tunnelma!

Ihmettelin hieman noita kappaleita, jossa on sama henkilö kahdesti peräjälkeen. Eikö ne voi olla vain samassa osiossa, kunnes nainen vaihtuu taas mieheksi?

Tämä oli miellyttävä tarina, ainakin se mitä ymmärsin :D Osaat luoda romantiikkaa ja hyvää juonta!

Kiitos!

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